my chosen place for dinner
is a small place in the grass
where we could sit in privacy
and you could squeeze my
lemon into my iced tea
this is my chosen tipple
and when you get hungry
i will happily let you lick my
ice cream, strawberry flavoured
or chocolate, i'm not fussy
then we can lie back in the grass
and you can rub my
back because i love it
alfressco is the way
we can eat anywhere in the world
as long as we can play
(just a fun poem for my AP hubby)
A contest entry
- Let's Have Dinner! by Ted E Bare.
300 points, ended August 12, 2007, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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dam. this is nice. just the words that ppl would think that goes in those places. this really made me smile. good job. lol.
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this is one wild picnic you have pen here dear and I see why he did not turn you down
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That is one wild and wonderful picnic for a Ted E Bare! Just think, that's only dinner...can't wait to see how the rest of the delicious treats to eat will play out. I want to thank you for entering my "Let's Have Dinner" contest.
Ted E
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Cute. Brings to mind jokes from my childhood.
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hee hee thats great... I loved it,,,He is a lucky guy. Good luck in contest
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