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Fading Flames

The flames of love should never fade,

The heart will learn  from it's mistake.

You take what you've learn and will trade,

The worst of the days.

I can't see the way of the dark anymore,

Everything I have learned is now a closed door.

I thought you cared,

But you were never there.

I thought I knew everything I need to know,

I guess the truth was just a bow.

Waiting and waiting to crush love,

Now the truth is a blood red dove.

The flames of  the fading time,

Will never show you mine.

I will always carry this fading flame,

You will always be so lame.

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  • emLeejo
    July 29, 2007

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    awh that was very good, and cute.. the ending so made me smile lol. but it was a great write! good luck in the contest!