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Six feet deep

Peace back together a life thats been forsaken.
Things that I do
The dreams for which I persue
Have they all been doomed?
Or will i be able to fight through
Six feet deep buried under trash
So much life i still need to grasp
As I close my eyes
I pray for my future
I pray for a change
But somehow I feel that it my never change.
Six feet deep with no way out..........

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  • Dark-whispers05
    September 10

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    wow.

    i guess i never read this one when i was always on here. im pretty impressed. you and i need to hang out..i miss our friendship. keep writing dawg. lol.
    bye bye.