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The Unknown Mask

I walked by you every day
But you saw someone not meant to be
Like a reflection it wasn't real
Cause my mask always hid me

You saw a girl that tried to be perfect
But behind the mask she was afraid
You saw someone that was never scared
But you didn't see how her nightmares were made

Behind her mask no one saw the tears
And no one thought she was sad
If you removed the mask she'd fall to pieces
And everyone would feel bad

She was fragile like a piece of glass
Her heart kept breaking and nobody knew
Nobody understood that her mask hid her scars
And cutting was all she could do

She didn't know how to stop the pain
And nobody was there to listen to her cry
So the girl she once knew hid behind the mask
Until one day she'd eventually die

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  • maggy1126
    August 21, 2007

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    I really enjoyed ur poem my fav
    Behind her mask no one saw the tears
    And no one thought she was sad
    If you removed the mask she'd fall to pieces
    And everyone would feel bad


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    July 28, 2007
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    Absolutely what I am looking for. Wonderfully done.
    Thank you for your entry.
    Soulful Woman

    • DestinedLove6879
      July 28, 2007
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      thanks i wasn't sure if it was what you were looking for in the contest or not but i was hoping it was.