Master's brush sweeps vast canvas,
embeds orbital gems
within nimbus clouds of swirling stars.
glowing globe rises to dawn’s earthen palette-
citrus, plum, peach and raspberry greet
blueberry morn dabbed with meringue;
eggplant shadows.
translucent ocean blues enfold
oddly shaped rolling greens
teeming with rainbowed life.
Author notes
Prompt: Brush Me Beautiful
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie ~ 10 x 50 x 30 ~ Reserve Your Spot Now! ~ by Celticmoon.
450 points, ended July 28, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - prewrite by Melissa Gayle.
400 points, ended September 23, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Fun!! by Poemdancer.
800 points, ended August 10, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow! I love your use of colors your vivid imagery, and your strong portrayal. Great write! I thoughrouly enjoyed it, thank you for entering my contest! I loved it all but my favorite line was 'glowing globe rises
to earthen flowing palette-' A very interesting and unique write!
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Very vivid descriptions, from space sky to earth to oceans.
Excellent word choices, stanza two, to use color names that are also produce of the earth. Then a lovely lagoon and its rainbowed life.
Very enjoyable write!
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Lovely imagery. I love the way that this builds like watching creation unfold before your eyes. Very nicely done.
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butiful Joyce
xxx cheeky xxx
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WOW!
you have penned an awesome rainbow of dynamic hues that tantalize the pallet of the mind. Bravo! Thank you for entering and good luck!
Blessings
Bel
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This is beautiful! Excellent imagery. Kinda made me hungry too!
Good luck in the contest!
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Your prompt is: Brush Me Beautiful
Or
The picture on the main page
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Hey! Good luck!
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