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Destiny Realized!

For three months

they have shared and cared

for each other

 

Now

destinies wondrous revealings

unfold

 

His heart is all a-flutter

as he floats toward his future

 

She senses his approach

and gasps for air

grasping for her throat

 

Their eyes lock~

 

with that inner knowing

that this bliss is

meant to be

 

Hearts touch~

 

Longings lets loose

as souls sail

 

body on body

awash in feelings

 

A breathless embrace~

 

After awhile...

 

Their heightened heartbeats calm

As hand in hand they wander

en route, toward

tomorrow...

Together.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Anna Emkah
    November 6, 2007

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    Very nice. I could picture the story in your words very well. After three months they finally know what they mean to each other. There is a connection in eyes, heart & soul... Sensual! I like it. Well done. *Anna*


  • Blue Rew silver member
    October 25, 2007

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    Very sensual and flows with tenderness.
    I enjoyed the visual presentation here.
    So many can identify with this tentative
    trust turned to faith in tomorrow's dream.


  • Asdzaa Nadleehe
    October 21, 2007
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    so very beautiful...
    Peace and best wishes with this entry..
    ~A~


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    August 17, 2007
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    aw....if I were single...wait.....if any SHE were single, she'd be nutz not to grab yah.....


  • tara wilson gold member
    August 9, 2007

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    Thank you very much for this entry into my contest


  • TwiztidMaggot
    July 28, 2007

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    wow, this is great! this is how long me and my bf have been togehter... longer actually. lol. good write! I love it! keep it up!!!!!!

    Crimson


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    July 28, 2007

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    These words are beautiful and touch my heart. I have felt like this and I know the feelings you have conveyed in this piece. The wonder of it all is amazing. Destiny is truly realized.
    Soulful Woman

  • Adebesin
    July 28, 2007
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    excellent

    this is a wonderful write.....i love the way you portrayed the power of fate/destiny..keep it up


  • innocence jaded.xx
    July 28, 2007

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    Awww I really like this poem=] It's so romantic and I loved the format of this piece!!

    "Their eyes meet first,
    lockin' with that inner knowing
    that this bliss is meant to be."

    I really liked those lines because they really stood out to me! Good luck in that contest you entered!


  • Dragons Lady
    July 28, 2007

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    So beautiful and full of romance. It has a gentle and almost innocent feel to the words as they flow so smoothly. Very nicely penned. Good luck in the contest.


  • redwingedblackbird
    July 28, 2007
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    So romantic, but in an unjaded almost innocent way. good job

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