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Drops glistening off red, yellow and blue

Drops glistening off red, yellow and blue
Lines sparkling off rainbow petals like lightning
The sun bursting out of female pollen in a planetary disruption
Stars of color, flashing before the eyes and causing them to water
Dizzying shapes, that move with the wind
A green so dark that the beauty is unmeasured
A butterfly in Brilliance afloat in waves of nature

Then, a sudden close up
Everything goes dark
Green covers green and black takes over

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Written September 2nd, 2003

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