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True Love

She always wanted to fall in love with a prince.
Who wore lilac color robes,
and whose crown was to heavy to wear.
He had glimmering blue eyes,
and always wore a perfect smile.

He would take her to an ivory tower.
So high it kissed the sky.
An eternal kiss a kiss of true love.

And now she was in love and it,
was not a prince, not even close.
He didn't have a crown or robes.
His eyes green not blue.
And he never ever smiled.
But his tongue touched her soul.

She loved him for his flaws and his mistakes.
For he had green skin,
and fit in the palm of her hand.

But most of all she loved him,
because he loved her too.
It was true love not the love of fantasy.

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this is a love poem in other word option 1.

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  • PonyPride
    July 16, 2008
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    this was cute, very clever. thanks 4 the entry


  • BeautifulNitemare
    October 20, 2007

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    awww this was so cute. I'm in love with a frog too 'he he' hope he doesn't see that! lol well any cute poem great detail BUT too much repitition. Good job!


  • smntha.
    July 31, 2007
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    this was so cute. it was really good. the detail was amazing.