Do not leave me this way, empty and alone.
To you I give myself freely,
a servant to your lustful desires.
Compassion for your heart tears mine
as I lie naked before you.
The energy of the moon will caress your mind
as I caress your body.
Give in to the escalating passion
rising before my eyes,
pleasure unfolds in many ways.
Take me, I beg you, into your world,
let me place you in my body.
Serving your lustful desires,
I give myself to you freely.
Do not leave me this way, empty and alone.
Author notes
picture inspired contest
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A contest entry
- Another one of those Pic inspired ones by rainyday woman.
475 points, ended July 29, 2007, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, Josie
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Congratulation On the Gold Impressive write
Well deserved award, I had to read it twice I really enjoyed your words,
LISA
The energy of the moon will caress your mind
as I caress your body.
Give in to the escalating passion
rising before my eyes.
Pleasure unfolds in many ways.


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This is wonderful. I like the repeating words at the end.

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Thank you for entering
Thanks for entering my contest. You have truly penned a wonderful representation of this picture with your words. Good luck in the contest and in all you endeavor in life.
Cheryl
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Goodnesssssss, this was well, awesome. stolen my breath you did. This flowed nicely, great imagery, great emotion. Well done sweetie.
Tory
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