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A Cold Moon Night

Do not leave me this way, empty and alone.
To you I give myself freely,
a servant to your lustful desires.
Compassion for your heart tears mine
as I lie naked before you.

The energy of the moon will caress your mind
as I caress your body.
Give in to the escalating passion
rising before my eyes,
pleasure unfolds in many ways.

Take me, I beg you, into your world,
let me place you in my body.
Serving your lustful desires,
I give myself to you freely.
Do not leave me this way, empty and alone.




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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    October 30, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, Josie


  • esroddo silver member
    August 8, 2007

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    Congratulation On the Gold Impressive write

    Well deserved award, I had to read it twice I really enjoyed your words, LISA
    The energy of the moon will caress your mind
    as I caress your body.
    Give in to the escalating passion
    rising before my eyes.
    Pleasure unfolds in many ways.


  • moodswinger
    July 31, 2007
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    This is wonderful. I like the repeating words at the end.


  • rainyday woman silver member
    July 29, 2007

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    Thank you for entering

    Thanks for entering my contest. You have truly penned a wonderful representation of this picture with your words. Good luck in the contest and in all you endeavor in life.
    Cheryl


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    July 28, 2007

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    Goodnesssssss, this was well, awesome. stolen my breath you did. This flowed nicely, great imagery, great emotion. Well done sweetie.
    Tory

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