Shadows flicker upon our nakedness,
flames of desire dance in the night.
Tasting the sweetness with each caress,
our passion stirs in the candlelight.
Feather bed of softness, lay my head,
wrap your arms around my body bare,
Feeling your soft touch, thighs slowly spread.
whispering sighs, come take me there.
Wanting you so, I lose all control,
been dreaming of this night for so long.
Fell so in love, you touched my soul,
now here with me is where you belong.
Each waking hour the wick slowly burns
you fill me with pleasure through the night.
Peaks of desire, my body yearns,
moving in sync with shadows delight.
My heart melts too as the candle glows,
one last flicker before shadows cease.
Together as one, in silence love grows.
holding tight as we feel love release.
In a list
A contest entry
- Romance By CandleLight. by Poetryintheblood.
350 points, ended July 31, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This was just beautiful, so sensuous & romantic. It had a good story that gave enough information without giving too much
something not so easy to do! Well done and thanks for sharing, it was a lovely read 
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Wonderful Comment
Thank you for your heartfelt thoughts. I am so glad you enjoyed my poem. You take care. Bless you. Sandy
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Excellent
This was so well done. It just drips sensuality. Congrats on the bronze.
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this is one sensual tender poem for the prompt of candle light
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great
Feather bed of softness, lay my head,
wrap your arms around my body bare,
Feeling your soft touch, thighs slowly spread.
whispering sighs, come take me there....
its damn awkward marvelous sis.a please to read this afternoon.it is like i was feeling the touches* myself.keep it up.have a nice evening.bye and take care
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, Josephine
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Thar is the begining of a good night
Good sleep and sweet dreams. May you have enough tolast a life time. may you love as lone as you live, and live as lone as you are in love mac
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Sweet Comment
Thank you Mac for the lovely comment. I appreciate your thoughts. You take care, Sandy
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Very sensual. I love the way this is written without great detail but leaving some to the imagination. Yet, the imagery is very nice. A relaxing and loving scene painted with your words. The words flow so smoothly from your pen speaking of love and romance. Very nicely done.
. Rewarded 6
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Wonderful Comment
Your comment was lovely. Thanki you for reading and commenting. You take care, Sandy
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Very beautifully penned. I loved reading this poem. It is erotic but softly erotic. I love the way it flowed from one line to the next as if it were a flowing spring. Wonderfully done
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Very Nice Comment
Thank you for stopping by and reading. A very nice comment you have written. Taker care, Sandy
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beautiful
I love poems like this. Not a whole lot of explicate detail of the intamacy but just enough so you know there is intamcy. As well as very beautifully written. Full of romance and feeling! WONDERFUL
. Rewarded 4
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Thank You
Hello Annie, Your comment was wonderful. So nice of you to stop by. I appreciate your thoughts. Take care, Sandy
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One passion pen is flowing with ink and romance. Wow what a ride you gave me as the reader. Wishing my love life was like this one. It is wonderful. I think breath taking describes it so much better. Great job. Love it from start to finish.
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Nice Comment!!
Thank you earthstar for this lovely comment. So glad you enjoyed. You take care, Sandy
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hot and so sensuous. Breath taking imagery and a story line that really captures ones imagination. You really took the reader for a wonderful ride of passion and romance...
I think you sos an outstanding job and I think this piece is a true winner. Good luck in the contest...
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Wonderful Comment
Good Morning Edward. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. It is always a pleasure to read your thoughts. Thanks for reading my friend. You take care now, Sandy 
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A Passionate Penning
I love the way your words flow, weaving your thoughts of love in this passionate poem. You paint a beautiful picture of two lovers wrapped within the glow of a single candle. Your quill has feathered thy heart. Thank you for sharing your words, and best of luck in the contest.
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Great Comment
Thank you for stopping by and reading. Your comment was very nice. You take care, Sandy
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This is a jolly nice poem about love, it is mildly erotic and gains its own power from that and the thoughtful words. t
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Lovely Comment
Thank you for the nice comment. I appreciate you stopping by. Take care, Sandy
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A WONDERFUL POEM
i enjoyed it imensely keep up the good woork and good luck in the contest
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Great Comment
Thank you for stopping by. I appreciate your nice comment. Take care, Sandy
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Excellent
A poem of passion. Loved the imagery and sweet feelings of love..Very Talented poem with a great flow of style..Thank you for sharing such a wonderful poem.
. Rewarded 4
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Lovely Comment
Thank you Gordie for the nice comment. I appreciate you reading and the lovely comment you have written .You take care and enjoy the day!! Sandy
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