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Tell me m love do you remember the day, of you desire for me and wanting to play,
Your body and mine, with unfulfilled needs, and my wondrous delight, as you swallowed
My seed, but tell me my love how did it taste, was tangy, or salty. Or “bittersweet”
I thank you now for that thoughtful treat, or was it citrus, or spicy, with a hint of “lemon” zest, it must have been good, as you put your head down, and lapped up the rest,
Blue eyes a glowing, blonde hair a shining, I felt as though nothing was missing, and I could taste me on the lips I was kissing, you and me mixed, such an unusual flavor,
But the look on you face as I returned the favor, is one I’ll remember and one I shall savor, you shiver and shake, you tremble and moan, with lust or passion, I suppose,
Your face is all red, you’re arching your back, and then you do that thing, you know, the trick with your nose,
Such memories I have, to sustain me through time, of times we were together and you were mine, but now there all gone, things are not quite the same, but tell me my love what the hell is your name?
A contest entry
- Time is Tearing me Away by thorlorn thanatos.
490 points, ended August 11, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Alot of imagery there. Some strong stuff =)
I like how you're describing something that was perfect between you. I like the rhyming too =)
The end is a bit abrupt, but I like how it's short and sweet. It seems that you care a little bit about the fact that they are no longer there, but at the same it seems like you feel you could find someone to take their place.
Good luck in the contest =)
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thank you very much for the H.M. i supose my cheque fo one thousand pounds is in the post? lol
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Not just a cheque... a biscuit too =)
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a chocolate one i hope
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Belgian! =)
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