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There's Something Different

There's something different
In the way she looked at me
Didn't stop to say good morning
Didn't offer the usual kiss
There's something different
In the way she talked to me
Didn't seem as bubbly as usual
Didn't say a word without being asked

...

There's something different
In the way I feel today
So I didn't say good morning
And I didn't want to kiss her
There's something different
In the way I think today
I've been feeling down all night
So I didn't say a word when avoidable

I'm sorry if I acted oddly
But how can you put up the
Happy, bubbling exterior
When inside, you're shattered?

Author notes

The first part before the elipsis (...) is from the POV of my mother; the second part is my POV.

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