A few more months have passed us by,
And so I sit.
I never wanted you to cry,
This I admit.
It seems I screwed up, so I'm told,
We did not try.
And for so long, I felt so cold,
I had to die.
This time that passed has made me see,
You still are gold.
And so I wish that you fly free,
And not grow old.
Forever friends, I'll never quit,
I'd love to be.
I hope that time won't let us split,
That is my plea.
Author notes
This is the final of my poems about before my breakup to after... I'm fine without her, but hope she will remain my friend.
Sappy, I know, but all for a good cause.
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Hoodwinked
I feel I am in the same boat. They sai if you love someone, set them free. If they come back, it is meant to be. Well I have let go and they came back but on;y to fly away again. -
Hood-Winked!
Short, simple, sweet. Letting go is hard to do but trying to remain friends with someone is a good sign in any relationship. I really wish you the best in all of your endeavors.
animated
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Hood-Winked!
Such a heartfelt and loved filled write. I could feel your pain. I hope she will continue to be your friend too. I am sorry for your broken heart. I will pray for you
You have just been Hood-Winked
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omg you fregin rock!! xoxo AVXCHICK
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good write!!
Your poem makes me think of a quote I made up a long time ago, well its not really a quote but close to it, " only time will tell..." and ur poem made me think of that and yes that is a good thing!! Especially the last stanza was my fave!! good write!!
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Thank you. It's been a long hard road, but my poetry helped every bit. Did you notice the rhyme scheme?
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