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And The Soul Is Met Past A Dream

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Within the light of the stars
and the moon
time speaks
of those journeys and quests
met only in a revelation
where enlightenment touches
your imagination,
And awakens your soul
transcending your thoughts
to a world of indescribable
yearning and desire,
Proclaiming to your heart
the gift of love and the gift of life,
Undoubtedly you fall into it,
Misty reflections
soothe the mystique
in a passionate fire,
Voluptuous only in time,
Cool past an echo
where your shadows whispers
only a song,
And the soul is met past a dream
for what I see in your eyes
touches in the wind
and the silence meets those images forever kept.

July 25, 2000

By: B.E. Whitehorn & Lori Breed

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Written January 15th, 2002

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  • Ladie Lee
    October 23, 2003
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    wonderful

    beautiful poem, if it means what i think it does i have felt those same emotions, as much anyway as any two people can feel the same emotion. it says so perfectly and so gently what runs to quickly through my head to put it into a poem. thank you for a lovly read and i hope that you'll read more of my things, you leave well written critiques.
    Ladie
    PS one can have more than TWO seperate lives


  • sidewinder silver member
    January 15, 2002
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    Thanks atia!
    glad you enjoyed it !

  • atia
    January 15, 2002
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    This was very beautiful and peaceful.. You do have a few spelling errors. Enlightment - Enlightenment, Urning - Yearning (I think thats what you mean), voluptous - voluptuous and wht - what.