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Black Shirt and Blue Jeans

You rubbed against me,
Your lips taking mine,
Innocence so at odds with your
Strong personality.
Our limbs entwined,
Kissing, breathing each other's breath,
Hiding out in the corners,
Moving to the hallways and outside
When caught by others.
At the end of the night,
Whispered (and not so whispered) words
Run through us,
Promises of another time together.
Will I see that same frisky side of you
On our date, in our 'together time'
Away from our parents, our families?
Will I feel you pressing against me once again?
I can only hope, for it's mere hours
Until I see you once again,
And this time we'll be back
In the darkened seats of the cinema,
Where no one will see or care.
See you soon...

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Mmmmmm......

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  • Balldinger silver member
    July 31, 2007
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    at least you were clothed properly... ~ EZB


  • GuardianPhoenix7289
    July 31, 2007

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    Interesting...

    I like how you sort of began it like it was going to be an erotica... but then it had so much more feeling and thought in it! Great write, I really liked this one alot!!!

    • darkknight marellus
      August 1, 2007
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      Yeah well.....lol. Thanks Alex. It did start sorta erotica, as I write that... but it's not QUITE that far.......lol

      Ellie


  • tara wilson gold member
    July 30, 2007

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    This takes me back....lol...that's all I can say....and I miss this 'hidden' relationship young love feeling...
    thanks for your entry!

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