You rubbed against me,
Your lips taking mine,
Innocence so at odds with your
Strong personality.
Our limbs entwined,
Kissing, breathing each other's breath,
Hiding out in the corners,
Moving to the hallways and outside
When caught by others.
At the end of the night,
Whispered (and not so whispered) words
Run through us,
Promises of another time together.
Will I see that same frisky side of you
On our date, in our 'together time'
Away from our parents, our families?
Will I feel you pressing against me once again?
I can only hope, for it's mere hours
Until I see you once again,
And this time we'll be back
In the darkened seats of the cinema,
Where no one will see or care.
See you soon...
Author notes
Mmmmmm......
A contest entry
- You, were wearing a green dress... by tara wilson.
1700 points, ended July 30, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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at least you were clothed properly... ~ EZB


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There's that! Yeah.....lol
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Interesting...
I like how you sort of began it like it was going to be an erotica... but then it had so much more feeling and thought in it! Great write, I really liked this one alot!!!
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Yeah well.....lol. Thanks Alex. It did start sorta erotica, as I write that... but it's not QUITE that far.......lol
Ellie
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This takes me back....lol...that's all I can say....and I miss this 'hidden' relationship young love feeling...
thanks for your entry!


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