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Say I'm A Dreamer

I'm making life long future plans.
I cant sleep, I'm excited to breathe.
Discovering the ingredients of my soul;
    personality recipe.
Motivations and sky high aspirations,
    a free spirited woman to-be.
All that I'm missing
    is a dude for the kissing.
Someone to dream with me.

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A contest entry

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  • Chelsea Void
    October 1, 2007

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    I loved this and I could really relate. I think you used rhyme to your advantage in this piece. well done!


  • MoJu
    July 28, 2007

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    High spirits is a good thing to have. Very bright poem.

    ~O

  • rubixcube1
    July 28, 2007
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    very well written