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Sneezin' Pair

 

Dear Chandni,
Is all I've heard true?
A bug has got a hold of you,
sneezing, coughing, watery eyes.
Please tell me that those are lies?



                         Hi Julie,
                         Yes, I'm sad to say
                         I've not been well, look kind of gray.
                         But that is not the worst of it.
                         You're sick too! Now what'd YOU get?



Sigh, it is sad, though oh so true
How can I begin to tell you
About what happens when I eat
Also, I'm burning up with heat!



                         Geez, that is bad yet this is worse
                         This sickness has become a curse
                         I can't get up, I feel so weak
                         Barely the strength to start to speak



I understand just how you feel
I'm miserable, what a raw deal
I've been through all that you have said
And there's no way to clear my head



                         Both of us sick? It's just not fair!
                         Together we'd make quite a pair
                         And what the heck, if that's the case
                         Why don't we join the amazing race?



Ooo, great idea, please count me in
After all, poems come from within
And though as odd as it may seem
I'm sure we would make quite a team



                         Yup, that is true, let's join the race
                         We'll do what we can, at our own pace
                         Though if it's hard to concentrate
                         We'll do our best at any rate!

 

 

Author notes

The Amazing Race - Round 1 - Ryan's Road

By: trista & Never Fall in Luv

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Status: Two sick and sneezin' people

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  • DarkRomantic113
    April 14, 2008
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    Cute. Never knew how close you and Trista were.


  • warrior-eagle
    September 23, 2007
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    Lol. I like this poem.


  • Walking shadow
    August 13, 2007

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    Hood-wink!!!

    I hate it when me and my mate get sick at the same time. We both just sneeze and carry on all day long. You done a great job explaining the misery of having the bug. Good to see you again getsbetter. Miss you.


  • tawk gold member
    August 11, 2007

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    Hood-Wink!

    Great job to both of you!! I love the conversation going back and forth between you both. Wonderful imagery within. I hope you both were not sick when you wrote this..

    You have just been Hood-Winked courtesy of the Poetic Bandits


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    July 28, 2007

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    Hi Sweetheart:
    I left Julie a comment so here is yours.
    I loved this piece, it was really cute and showed lots of talent. I am very glad that the two of you get along so well. She is an amazing lady. I can tell that you really like her.
    I wish you both the best

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Love ya,
    Granny


  • Ryno
    July 28, 2007

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    Lmao. Well, this is quite an original way of stating it, and let me say, I'm glad you decided to join Hehe, I liked the format of the discussions. Thanks for the laugh.


  • Death of the Author
    July 28, 2007

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    Lmao - no time to comment much, but this is really great, well done to both of you. Good luck in the contest! x

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