As you look above
Remember him
Hes looking down
Oh how proud he is
His body is gone
But his love is forever
Remember how he loved you
Cry your tears
Let in the pain
But only for a moment
Than remember the good times
How happy he was
Keep him close in your heart
Never let go
Hold on to the memory
He is always apart of you
Keep moving on
He will always be there
He is your guardian angel
Protecting you everyday
Don't ever forget him
He will always be there
His love is eternal
A contest entry
- RIP My Brother (Contest) by Child of an Angel.
475 points, ended August 20, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Love It!
Very well put, I love the thought of having a guardian angel. I don't know where I'd be without God on my side. It seems like he planned my life to have a perfect ending despite the obstacles along the way. Your poem is very significant to me, and I thank you for sharing it with the public. Great Job!
-Chris
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I love this for myself, but as for children, with the young age it might be hard for them to follow, but this is still a great poem and I do appreciatte the time you took for my contest. I wish you the best of luck, and good times.
Emily
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