Look up
Into the skies
You'll see me
That's no suprise
I love you now
and forever so
Just hold on
and don't let go
Look to the future
let go of the past
Always work hard
and you wont finish last
Just keep on living
day to day
Always persevere
In every way
Try your hardest
In everything
If you do that
It'll make my heart sing
Remember that when
One door is shut
Two doors open
Just follow your gut
I want you to live
your life to the full
But remember me
In your heart and soul
Author notes
When I was two, my mom died, so when I wrote this, I was thinking of what she'd say to me now
A contest entry
- RIP My Brother (Contest) by Child of an Angel.
475 points, ended August 20, 2007, 13 entries
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Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest. You did a wonderful jobin making this catchy for a childs mind, yet endeaing to even my adult heart. The flow was great as was the rhyme, Im sorry about your mother, mine passed when I was only 4, so i know your pain. I wish you the best luck.
Always
Emily
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