Forbidden Love

What would it be like
If we can show the world
We are in love
Oh but love is forbidden

Each moment we meet secretly
Just whispering a few words
A warm embrace of heavenly feelings
Oh but love is forbidden

My soul dance entwine with yours
Sernading with a touch of tranquility
Serenity enveloped us into one heartbeat
Oh but love is forbidden

Love for you is unbearable
Sometimes I feel I will explode
With just thoughts of you
Oh but love is forbidden

In this situation
I feel pain, torture encircle me
Until I see you, feel you
Oh but love is forbidden

I am falling to pieces
How long will this be?
I want to forever embrace you freely
Oh but love is forbidden

Can anyone understand?
Somebody please help me
This love is real surviving in pain
Oh but love is forbidden

A contest entry

The Pain That Love Brings by Sesheta. 600 points, ended September 10, 2007, 64 entries
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PrabhuDayal Khattar
July 28, 2007
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PrabhuDayal Khattar
July 28, 2007
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Can anyone understand?
Somebody please help me
This love is real surviving in pain
Oh but love is forbidden

Well this is really a true heartfelt poem revealing the depth of the heart..I love the immagery and the sentiments grown here in this write which are truly wonderful and impressive as well..thanks for sharing such a touching poem..

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