Pomegranate green tea afternoons
from a bottle
staring into oblivion via your ceiling fan
the infamous call at 6 am from your mother
on your day off
It's chow mein and one chopstick
your last cigarette that just had to break
drifting violently off to sleep
the last marshmallow in Lucky Charms
American girls
Staying out till 2
when you have to be to work at 6
the disreputable breakups
everyone BUT American girls
sleeping in till 2
And I know it's easy to judge
when everyone has their own vices
but I can guarantee this ones a lil more twisted then the others
it takes brains and guts
something most bartenders can't serve
No nothing compares to this
quite like an orgasm of emotion oozed on paper
leaving the reader to clean up the mess
Yes I can honestly say
this is my passion
Author notes
Again I'm never quite sure what people are looking for but I hope this hits the spot. I took a lot of thought into this.
A contest entry
- PitBull on a HatBox by NurseChilly.
1800 points, ended August 1, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i think you did a fine job- thanks for entering
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I'm not sure of pomegranite green tea?? but hey, whatever... an unusual combination as pomegranites are metaphorically associated literally with Sex and Love, lust and such like...
but I'd like to thank you for entering the contest.. you made my mind go pop a few times.. and that's okay -
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I think I should've entered my latest poem into your contest...but then again hindsight is 20/20
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Yea that was kinda the point lol....but as I said before..I think Im going to get my butt kicked in this contest...
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