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For my Best Friend

Memories flood a loney mind,
Each one a remembered tear.
After another carved set of intials,
You'd fight away my every fear.

Mascara running in perfect harmony,
A broken heart continues to sing.
An angst ridden lullaby for the lonely,
You saved me from growing wings.

I ♥ U carved into a scarred thigh,
Carved over the initials of that one guy.
Left with a kiss and two beating hearts,
You kept me from falling apart.

A growing feeling of dispair reaches extreme,
Can't find the pocket where it hides.
The worst fear in the base of a broken heart,
The thought of her best friends suicide.

Author notes

My best friend was really upset and it hurt so much not knowing what to say to help him.. I love him so much that if anything ever happened i'd no longer know who I was, what I was doing...

Tommy... i &hearts you.
I don't breathe without you somedays, I don't live without your hugs that always make me feel better, I don't cry until I'm alone with you because you don't just tell me it's alright when it's not.

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  • TommyTRASH
    July 28, 2007

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    *hugs you*
    I luv yoo girl.
    I really do...you're incredibly special to me.
    Thanks for being there for me and putting up with my shit.
    Ill never forget it
    or you
    for aslong as i live

    Tommy


  • Nostalgia
    July 27, 2007

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    Wow.....That was an amazing and deep piece. I'm sorry for you pain, I know it sounds lame but yah. This is one of the deepest pieces of poetry I've read in a long while. Thank you for sharing.