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My Hollywood Romance

Fearless again
"We go on in ten."
Offering you these bleeding wrists
Its all I can do to coexist

I know you don't love me
I remember the way you said it absently
You said it with body language--
"Lights, camera, action!"
The petty lies were just a distraction

Oh, my life was never good without you--
"Cut, scene change, take two!"
You were everything I ever knew
Eight long years I wasted my time
Just to find you were asinine

Its just like the big city
Life can be so incredibly shi--
"Act one, scene one!"
Love can so often come undone
Interrupted by such--
"Stop daydreaming, the act has begun!"

I left the studio crying
Trying to keep from screaming, but only trying
I went back home without you
Our hollywood romance will never do.

Author notes

I don't know... started off with a thought of an ex-boyfriend and ended up in society's problems. Eh!

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  • Ace of Spades88
    September 20, 2007
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    I like it. if anyone can give writen word a soul it's you.


  • XXxMCRxXx
    July 28, 2007
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    i loved reading this. its creative how u put commands in between. great write!
    - ally


  • DevinCora
    July 27, 2007

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    well isnt that how it works... I loved it it was bloody brillant (wrinkles nose) lol!!! Sorry felt like trading places with you fro a moment!! Oh what I would give to be inside that mind of yours!!! Even if it was only for a thought!!! Once again beautiful write...just like all of your others!!!


    ~steals comment virginity~