Fearless again
"We go on in ten."
Offering you these bleeding wrists
Its all I can do to coexist
I know you don't love me
I remember the way you said it absently
You said it with body language--
"Lights, camera, action!"
The petty lies were just a distraction
Oh, my life was never good without you--
"Cut, scene change, take two!"
You were everything I ever knew
Eight long years I wasted my time
Just to find you were asinine
Its just like the big city
Life can be so incredibly shi--
"Act one, scene one!"
Love can so often come undone
Interrupted by such--
"Stop daydreaming, the act has begun!"
I left the studio crying
Trying to keep from screaming, but only trying
I went back home without you
Our hollywood romance will never do.
Author notes
I don't know... started off with a thought of an ex-boyfriend and ended up in society's problems. Eh!
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I like it. if anyone can give writen word a soul it's you.


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i loved reading this. its creative how u put commands in between. great write!
- ally
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well isnt that how it works... I loved it it was bloody brillant (wrinkles nose) lol!!! Sorry felt like trading places with you fro a moment!! Oh what I would give to be inside that mind of yours!!! Even if it was only for a thought!!! Once again beautiful write...just like all of your others!!!
~steals comment virginity~



