an explosion of sorts
fire && water, darling
your my worst enemy
but everything I [crave.want.need] desire
a lack of morals
high self esteem
a free flying spirit
darling, take me along
be the yin to my yang
show me life
open my eyes
be my fire inside
&& as your eyes meet mine
[an explosion of sorts]
Darling,
your my very worst nightmare,
[yet everything I need]
because
your
everything
I'm
not
.
.
.
[♥]
Author notes
I don't like this poem, but I hope you do. Fire and water remind me a lot of wild && calm. peace && chaos. I brought that together in the form of, well, I guess desire. Envy.
I hope you like it.
A contest entry
- Water meets Fire! by Jcsketch82.
450 points, ended August 3, 2007, 10 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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'&& as your eyes meet mine
[an explosion of sorts]
Darling,
your my very worst nightmare,
[yet everything I need]'
I really like this, specailly^^ those lines [=
I've also had the feeling wayyy too much ]=
love♥
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I like this a lot, hun.
It's very deep && conjured up some really good images in my head. Well, not really images... but you get the idea, right?
Beautiful work, keep it up!
♠
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I really like this sweetie. I like the clash of different elements.
Darling,
your my very worst nightmare,
[yet everything I need]
because
your
everything
I'm
not
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
I can really relate to those lines because I've thought that about someone before. I love the way you write. Never stop ♥
xx
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