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Two Kids

Two lovers twist
in the spiral of desire.

Blood

Sweat

Tears

Two souls tangled
in the wheels of passion

Locked up

Tied down

Burnt out

Two minds become
enraptured in the grind of life
not really knowing

what could possibly come

of what they've done.

 

Not really knowing

the consequences

of one another.

 

Two kids

bound together by

what neither of them

yet know.

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  • marilynmansonsleeps
    August 6, 2007
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    oh my

    this lz lyk mine almost koolieo i luv sex poems


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 27, 2007
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    sounds like either friendship or love my friend.


  • RatherImaginative silver member
    July 27, 2007

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    It begins so passionately and finishes with a note of foreboding, almost as if there is something sinister lurking just ahead for these two blissfully unaware souls. Awesome write!