Indulgence fed with a bouqet filled with love
sweet scented red roses fill the air
love letters with a hint of your perfume
scattered all over my bed.
Your pictures fill my heart
your soft brown eyes
absorb my every desire for you
yearning to feel your breathe on my skin
feeling your slightly parted lips
engross mine with pure passion.
That smile of yours engulfs my body
paints a picture perfect of the beauty
that captivates my every being
of wanting you.
Nights I lay in bed
exhausting myself with the need
to feel your soft delicate skin
against my burning body.
As I close my eyes and drift to sleep
my body releases all the tension
felt through these many months
of the agonising wait
that is keeping us apart.
Now you are here with me
laying beside me everynight
and as we drift to sleep
our hearts beat in perfect harmony
with eachother.
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Very passionate write, it sweeps you away. Great poem, congrats on the several honors for it. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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Wonderful, the way you described the uncontrollable passion and desire was perfect. The story of sweet romance between two people never gets old, don't you agree? Great job, thank you for entering.
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Cj
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Wow, so delicately penned, thanks for your entry into my contest
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this is great,nice deep picture of love and patience,nice entry in our contest and good luck as always..mm
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well done
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to know a love like this is true harmony gently words
made to capture the coldest heart amazing penning best of luck in contest
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This is a very nice poem.
As I close my eyes and drift to sleep
my body releases all the tension
felt through these many months
of the agonising wait
that is keeping us apart.
Thanks for sharing and goodluck to you in the contest.Best wishes -
wow very beautiful poem you have here imagery is very moving just beautiful good luck in the contest
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very beautiful, i love the feel of it, you show a lot of talent keep on writting.
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What a beautiful write...certainly touching the core and written with intricacy...
good luck!
luv
pri
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You are a romantic to the bone this is a great poem and I enjoyed Nice work!
Thank you for the entry and good luck to you in the contest
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Sounds like love to me this poem speaks so beautifully of your new found love, Andy. I'm happy for you
Good luck in the contest
Dee
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WOW....my dear friend this piece is absolutely stunning. I loved this sooooo much. You have such a loving heart. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
Countrybabe
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First of all, great backround! Second, its so great to see such a tender and loving poem from you!
This makes me want to go crawl into bed with my honey and snuggle. I love it. Your poetry gets better and better, keep writing!
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This is how love should be I am glad you have found yours
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, Josephine
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Nice to meet you, I am moon2u
I wanted to take the time to tell you how much I enjoyed your poem. The presentation is beautiful
and it is so sensuous and lovingly feminine.
moon2u
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moon2u
Thankyou very much for commenting
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once again....and as always, very beautiful words that you weave hun. very special i am glad you are happy
tasha
xo
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