Her face was forgettable,
Like a quick glance at a single snowflake,
Maybe it was because i tried too hard to remember,
Her piercing-blue eyes,
That her image faded from my mind.
Please tell me what you think
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sweet and simple -
It could be expanded and made longer but it is really good the way it is,good imagery and you worded it well.
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Amazing. I love the way you write. So simple... so pure.
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I love this. It's short but the emphasis on the forgetting makes it really stand out.
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thnx..not many ppl commented this..but its one of my favs..
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i really like this one. the snowflake thing is divine, and the diction is great
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