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The Queer Mirror

A lurking fear that's
                    Somewhat queer and
I'm not too sure, but
            It's behind the door


This haunting thing I've
                    Watched since Spring that
Will not die, though
            I have tried


Is coming nearer in-
                    Side my mirror, it
Wears my face, under
            A cold embrace

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  • scottles
    July 29, 2007
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    ooo

    i liike this poem, its mysterious, and weird, to put it basically: its amazig! lol

  • LookIntoTheAir
    July 28, 2007
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    :o

    I love it!!! It's so creepy and mysterious
    Woot!

  • undying
    July 28, 2007

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    good

    short and semi sweet but what is this fear you have? what is the coldness that you feel is taking over your heart? how are you doing?


  • Skawe
    July 27, 2007
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    Ooh. ich mag es sehr. and i like how you got your message across.

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