On a cold sea blown night
Golden hair thrown around
Her eyes that match the sea
Sprinkled with the stars above
Knowing her loved ones
Apart from the rest
They all twinkled
And smiled upon her
Whishing to be with them
The ones she loved the most
Wishing on all the hope
To go join the heavens
That lonely little girl
Wishing on a star
Author notes
I am feeling a little sad ever since I read HP7 I know lame but it mad me sad because I still feel pain from loseing the ones I loved the most I dedicate this to my papa who died three years ago and my friend Annie who died of heart falurie.
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Comments
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This is a lovely poem, sad tho'. I love the shape it made, when finished to, nice touch
good luck in the contest!
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man i noe how u feel
its jus gunna be so weird not waitin for another hp book
=(
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O my gosh I felt bad after I read it too! This is a really good poem I liked it alot.
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It's important when we can express what hurts us through things such as writing. That's something to be proud of. You explained your feelings in this poem which is what I hope you do with all your poems; whether your feelings are happy or sad. As long as it's the truth, nothing else matters. Thanks for sharing this. Good job.
Brian
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