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each of us [ pebbles ]

 

 

I.

 

throw a pebble lightly at a pond -
          watch it sink for stones don't swim

          so well

         ( . )

 

 

II.

 

years pass
as water slowly works her art;
smooths away rough edges
through a gravity
of patient nips - each
drawn tautly calm,
as molecules & atoms
               there depart


[ in
  single
      file ]


 

returning to that
space where all

began

     [ & shall again ]

 

 

 

 

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  • transcendental baby gold member
    July 28, 2007

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    Pebbles do skim for a bit if thrown with skill ... this is an unusal and intriguing take on the contest ... I like that