I taste so many flavors
but only one makes my mouth
water.
Just thinking of you,
Captivating,
Breathtaking.
Denied my addiction,
I cannot have you,
the catalyst of my high.
I inhale your scent and
instantly I swim, the headrush
enough to knock me over.
You only exist in my mind,
having long been gone,
but my mind cannot do you
justice.
The real thing is...
oh-
so-
sweet.
Author notes
So can you tell what my drug of choice is? Please tell me.
Please tell me what you think
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love...the girl of your dreams..yet it always seems as if they don't exist, except only in your mind
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haha, fucking love it Nick, brilliant indeed. the last 4 lines ring in my head like something being read off in a low, rough, gravelly voice. I love it.
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Hood-Winked!
Love is your drug of choice. When we love someone it is so hard to let go when they are gone. Nothing I can say can make it any easier for you I know because I have been there before. But I know that in time you will start feeling better and be ready to move on. Wonderful write so full of emotion and imagery.
You have just been Hood-Winked courtesy of the Poetic Bandits
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this is really good
I can relate....you have talent! the metephore is well written and placed...good flow! I can feel your words! I am glad I stopped by. -
awsome
love of coures is the drug..... i loved it like always great job keep it up
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Goood.
Really good.
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striking!
I have been sitting here for about 5 minutes trying to decide what my favorite line(s) is/are... and i just cant. I could feel the desire in your words for this "drug of choice" (which i am assuming is a great love) and i was truly memorized by this write... wow very nice! -
I Agree!!
I think that this better be a girl or love of some kind of I will be quite upset. Nick shouldn't be drinking or smoking anything naughty. I miss talking to you. I like this write.
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I have to go sleep, but I thought I'd stop by...
There were some lines that really struck me and I kind of almost wish I had the emotion to react to them
like..
"Denied my addiction,"
"You only exist in my mind,
having long been gone,"
From my own experiance ... the drug choice is: The one you love
The same goes for me, and probably for you.
Don't go for the powdery drugs though. You know I'll kick your ass if you do.
NeveR ♥
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a girl? the ideal girl
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Very cool. I like the metaphor.
Favorite lines:
"You only exist in my mind,
having long been gone,
but my mind cannot do you
justice."
Great poem
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