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Crayola Love

You can find me chewing up forget-me-not-colored crayons,
& spitting them out just to draw me a synthetic 'you.'

puking purple in dirty, green stalls
  [isn't a trip to paradise,
but it
    was the perfect place that reminded me
              of us...

we colored red in every outline
& black in every surface
it was the coloring book of the future;;

another day in the life
my pores are seeping in blood
adding polka dots, disguised as chicken pox

you're left in another technicolored
                      warped life

my crayons are dull,
but i can no longer sharpen

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  • Re-invention silver member
    July 28, 2007

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    veyr creative. nice mind you have. a crayon love very good. I liked the first to lines. very nice written.