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Natures Lullaby

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Brilliant hues
entwined
Romance and passion
fills the air

Dusk has come
to call
As night shadows
dance across the horizon

Rippling waters
sing a lullaby
As the sun descends
beckoning calling the twilight

Two lovers embracing
lost to each other
Underneath natures canopy
upon a tropical island paradise

Author notes

Picture #1 "portland oh my portland."

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  • SeaWithYourHeart
    August 14, 2007

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    aww this is beautiful i love the paint termanology and wow well what can i say I just love it it is simple and says so much


  • Death of the Author
    August 1, 2007

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    Ahh I am jealous of those lovers. Wonderful picture and poem, thanks for entering. Take care and good luck x


  • Shirley Shaw
    July 30, 2007

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    WONDERFUL-POEM

    I REALLY ENJOYED EVERY WORD OF YOUR POEM... IT IS BEAUTIFUL, AND I LOVE THE PICTURE SETTING YOU CHOSE TO GO WITH IT ALSO.MAGNIFICO!!!!!! A PERFECT AAA+++.'GOD BLESS YOU'.LOVE, SHIRL;EY ANN SHAW-RAYTOWN,MO...


    • tawk gold member
      July 31, 2007
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      Thank you for your kind comments and applause. Have a great day


  • Candy6
    July 30, 2007
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    It's beautiful picture and it's beautiful write.

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