I adore symbols
on my body
collections of your devotion
with the rush and roar
of urgent hands
& the compliance
of emotion
my answer:
Yes
Author notes
for him
A contest entry
- "Talking in Bed" -- a poem by Philip Larkin by truembrace.
600 points, ended August 12, 2007, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Now we're talking ... this is the business ... love the way you say so much in your last line with the word "yes"! Love your poetry. Just have to add you as a favourite! Congrats on the bronze! x
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this is wonderful!- knew it was trophy wonderful...
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thank you Mary
unexpected for me with all those other great pieces, including yours in the contest..
woot.. golly
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that second stanza really got me. the image and idea of those verses leading into anticipation - such an intense moment captured through poetry.
thanks so much for this entry into the contest...
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"with the rush and roar
of urgent hands"
Sighhh...I love those currents, too...Good luck in the contest, my Friend...
Wanda
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you know... at first i though this was about abuse...
lol...
and then i went ooooooooo as i read on...
you got NUPED lol
good luck in the contest...
i loved this
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The word "yes" has so many facets. It is perfect here - for what it implies, the way it sounds and the way it looks at the close of this piece.
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Yes!
Soft and beautiful, with a hint of symbols.
Lovely write.
Best wishes in the contest.
Stacy
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a wonderful sense of anticipation here, before and after the yes...PK
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OUTSTANDING!!!!!!
NURSE CHILLY *hug*
SO MUCH SAID IN SO LITTLE!!!!!
VERY WELL WRITTEN, GREAT IMAGERY AND MADE ME CHUCKLE......
GREAT JOB!!!!!
KEEP ON PENNING!!!!
BE BLESSED WITH LOVE AND LIGHT ALWAYS.....
YOUR FRIEND IN PEN,
AngelicMistress...Tanya
*hug*
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Oh wow, this is good...I like every word in it! ^_^
Good luck in the contest!
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Here's a good luck bunny...
Her name is Wanda. -
hell ya! love this fiesty lovely write...
wonderful
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you're one smart puddytat... yes you are
stroke ya fur fer you miss ...
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Yes, yes, yes......AMEN to this poem and a big YES! Lovely, lovely poetry, my friend....yes is the only word, the only conversation!!
Loved this one...yes yes.
~ Nicolette
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thank you Nicci... nice to see you around girl
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sigh....love this!
"with the rush and roar
of urgent hands
& the compliance
of emotion"....beautiful poetry!
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sigh
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lovely
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thanks Elaine
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