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Just a Thought

Just a thought to
Clear my mind
About a
Swirling spindle

Flowing toward the
Crystal land
Where
I long to be

Taking now the
Simple thought and
Spinning it
Around

Touch my toes
Make me
Think

And wonder
What will
Come

Just a thought to
Clear my mind
About a crystal
World

In a list

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  • silverscent gold member
    August 5, 2007

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    Crystal, hey? I liked the idea of that, and you dipicted it quite well in this poem. The simplicity of "just a thought" worked well too. Thanks for entering.