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[ not meant to be ]

not meant to be
let me go
take my breath
no one has to know
you want her
i want you
want you to know
i am here
i have nowhere to gobreaking me down
studying my pieces
my thoughts and hurt
leave me alone
i am sorry i am tired
tired of trying
the story ends here
my eyes see you
how could you

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  • Dirty and Broken
    July 28, 2007
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    i am tempted to say i'm sorry...but i know it won't do anything....those r the most worthless words on the planet, it seems....
    i don't know what to say, ashley...i really don't...i don't know how to make this right, though i doubt i even can...
    i didn't mean to hurt you


  • tatteredweave
    July 27, 2007
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    yet you desperately hang on for one last moment .. I hear you ..