Oh God
It is preached that you dwell in me
this must be a malcontent task for you
as I am a baby pantomiming in the mud regularly
procreating you a muddy father as well
stressing you to run for a bath at least twice a day
to make you uncontaminated at the rivulet
Oh God ...
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired contest of my Island by SeaWithYourHeart.
520 points, ended August 14, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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What a very beautiful...ver spiritual write. Nice take on the picture..as always I am inspired.
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Another delightful piece...
Another delightful piece; although we must frustrate God at times, He is always gracious and has patience with us; the phrase "twice a day" reminds me of the song with regards to praising - "when you feel like it" and "when you don't"; wonderful poem. --Joe
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(pssst...you forgot to put Portland my Portland, in your author note) I like this ...but I wonder if only twice a day is enough to cleanse oneself...thank God He loves us muddy or not...You write so beautifully, I am ever inspired to read more.....Peace, Rhonda
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