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Swimming in the ocean with you

I feel the water flow over me
And your hands brushing hair out of my face
And the peaceful sound of the waves hitting shore

This is why I love swiming in the ocean with you
I feel a strange sence of peace flow over me
And I know that it's because I'm with you

As I step onto shore you call to me
I turn around and see the most amazing sunset in the world
All the colors blending together

The pinks, reds, purples all join together in harmony
You laugh and smile and it brightens my world even more
And I rush back in with the waves hitting my legs

We swim out farther today and look at all the colorful fish
And then it starts to get dark so we swim back in
As I get on shore and look back at the endless ocean I smile

When I turn back around you grab my hand
You say that we'll come back tommorow and smile at me
As we leave I get on last glimps of the ocean and remember
This is why I love swiming in the ocean with you

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Portland oh my Portland

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  • flaed
    August 1, 2007

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    and im going to kill you

    and is evil!!!! it is an everyday word.!!!!!!!! just use a comma or get rid of it entierly!!!! ur poems till work, try it!! pease!
    on stanza five, i get to shore looking back. on 4,you laugh,smiling,brightening my day. etc.