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Half Alive

I feel half alive
sometimes whole

I want to be more
to have something
I am not sure of

Don't make sense
not even to me

Something makes me hurt
get butterflies
get all tingly
get all emotional

You make me happy
sad
yearn
and I dunno

Emotions I don't understand
merry-go-round
twister
heart like a feather

Damn, I wish I had
just one little idea
of what I am feeling
would make life a bit easier ey?

~Tisha~

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Written September 2nd, 2003

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  • artis
    September 2, 2003
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    sometimes when passions wane a bit the world loses it's edge and all becomes slippery and we fail to grasp what we are seeking...we yearn for that high that heart thumping excitement that comes less at times and leaves us in a mood that is beyond words...Artis


  • Justmegary
    September 2, 2003
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    Hon, you are gonna be fine. Fear, joy, Bravado, and everything between. Welcome to life. Its the turmoil that makes us alive, feel and love life. You keep on keeping on my friend. You will be fine!!


  • 1star
    September 2, 2003
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    i had to read it a few times to really get at the heart of this one, but to me the subject is life. this are all the abstract feelings we feel from a day of life, or something.....
    i am so wierd

  • 1star
    September 2, 2003
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    i had to read it a few times to really get at the heart of this one, but to me the subject is life. this are all the abstract feelings we feel from a day of life, or something.....
    i am so wierd

  • LostInThought
    September 2, 2003
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    It's okay tish. You may not know how you feel, but I hardly know who I am. Sounds like Manic-Depression mixed with love to me.

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