The circle of love is
The life of a flower
The tiny seeds are sown
It grows and blooms
And it dies.
Yet the circle it makes
Depends on the flower
A pretty rose with thorns
Means a love sweet and sour
A flower that blossoms
Every single year
Is the unstable relationship
Of which we often hear
A flower that blossoms
Only once and no more
Is the one night stand
Or love out the door.
The circle of love is
The life of a flower
The tiny seeds are sown
It grows and blooms
And it dies.
Author notes
I had the idea for this whilst doing a class on literary devices (metaphors especially) and I thought it would make a good poem. It still needs some work though, I think.
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A contest entry
- Wat u think bout love ♥ by loveaswellashate.
375 points, ended August 19, 2007, 42 entries
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Comments
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This is a really good poem.. i like it.. sorry its taking so long.. lots of stuff goin on as the break is comeing to an end.. lol.. thanks for joining and good luck in the contest..
Laters
Loves...*hugs*
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