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Lookin Out the Window II

I look out the window
and my sight travels far,
to places I never thought
I could see!

Across the sands and waters,
through and between the clouds,
close to the setting sun.

Oh, the magnificence of it all!
Beauty unsurpassed!
Oh God, you have created
the most beautiful world,
one that endlessly awes and fascinates,
the inspires and makes us contemplate.

Oh, the many colours I see.
I want to look at them all,
yet I fear I might miss some,
Orange, red and yellow,
Indigo, grey and blue..
and so much more.

God, You have wowed me yet again
with the beauty of the nature
that You have created with care.


By: Nada Adel Sobhi

Author notes

portland oh my portland
Picture number 4

I put II next to my title coz I have another poem with the same title..
also my real name is not my AP nickname

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  • Prinzessin Lilliana
    August 3, 2007
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    Fantastic!

    I love the opening of your poem very much.I love looking out my window too
    Very vivid description of nature.God has created such captivating beauty in nature for us humans to contemplate his might and creativity.the more we see of nature the more we know about Him.Very spiritual piece,Nooni.
    Looking forward to read more

  • JustBreathe gold member
    July 31, 2007

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    Wonderful narrative of an appreciation of God's creations.

    "...You have wowed me yet again
    with the beauty of the nature
    that You have created with care."

    Great write! Thanks for sharing this one. Good luck in the contest!


  • SeaWithYourHeart
    July 27, 2007
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    I have picture 2 up if you like it let me know