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Love Poem

The defination love means to me
when we are honest and sincere.
When we say or do to each other
Sometimes our face shows that we're insecure.

The simple way to love someone
is to say "I Love You".
When we say it a lot that we love
that our love is likely true.

The other way to show love
when we give kisses and hugs
that is what the two lovers does
we might give each other a mug.

Also, when we give and share
a card or the single red rose
to show that our love is true,
and our love grows and grows.

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  • angelsslayer
    September 18, 2007
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    Oops. forgot to applaud.. So here it is


  • angelsslayer
    September 18, 2007
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    Fab poem. You explained everything really well. Love the flow the poem has as well. Nice.


  • Blueskywonder
    July 28, 2007
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    so true katy..,. beautifully expressed.
    A pleasure to read your work


  • Amera gold member
    July 27, 2007

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    Lovely, simple and sincere. Saying "I Love You" does not mean you love that person, we show it by actions. Well done.

    Love,
    Amera ♥


  • fleur de lys
    July 27, 2007

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    This is love! It does grow and grow by giving to each other in small significant ways. Lovely piece of writing.

    Hugs and love,
    Petratani

  • littlemandy
    July 27, 2007
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    Very good love poem.


  • Ephiphany
    July 27, 2007

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    Truthfully

    and softly spoken well thru this. I really enjoyed from the beginning to the end. Well spoken
    Ephiphany

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