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The Devil's Breath

The getting, the using,
and the getting more.
The worries, the fear,
the pain and the despair.

Brick by brick you build a wall,
with no windows or doors.
The darkness sets in, and your
soul is sucked right out of you.

You are trapped by guilt,
enslaved by sins.
Surrounded by demons,
smelling the devil's breath.

With flashes of suicide,
all meaning of life is gone.
Taken by the pipe, Crack Cocaine,
has left you lost and lonely.

Your family pays the price,
selp-pity hold you captive.
Your empty soul sits in despair,
verbally lost you suffocate.

Author notes

This is true life with the addiction of Crack Cocaine the use of the "you" is me... I lived this life glad to say I've got two years clean ~ Recovery is Possible

A whole person is one who has both walked with God and wrestled with the devil

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  • Salt Therapy
    July 30, 2007

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    This... is outstanding. Great write. I cannot say much more than that. Thanks for entering my contest, good luck! ~ Kerri

  • goalsv
    July 27, 2007

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    Excellent testimonial. First it is awesome that you have been clean for two years, second this is a good poem for many others to read. Some to show hope and others to show the way it can be during.