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~The Rose~

Slowly unfolding,
revealing it’s velvety secrets,
becoming evermore fragrant,
evermore open,
evermore beautiful...

Tended carefully,
the rose will reach
the pinnacle of beauty.
And to the truly loving eye
shall be revealed...

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Written September 2nd, 2003

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