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It's Been Quite A While [She Is Nothing]

There's an empty seat beside her
And a tear running down her face
A clenched hand oh so lonely
A soul without a place

To be exactly who she wants to be
Smiles and laughs, and every thing's so right
But without you standing next to her
She is nothing

And no one can see the pain inside
Hidden by so many fake smiles
And no one understands the pain she hides
It's been quite a while

Since;
Someone showed how much they care
Anyone other than you was there
Everything felt all right
She slept through the whole night
Since;
She's seen a smile
Yeah, it's been quite a while

There's an empty spot right next to her
Times moving way too slow
She walks all by herself
Feeling so alone

Happy is all she wants to be
Smiles and laughs, and every thing's all right
But your not standing next to her
She is nothing

No one knows the pain inside
Disguised by such fake smiles
No one gets the pain she hides
It's been quite a while

Since;
Someone showed how much they care
Anyone other than you was there
Everything felt all right
She slept through the whole night
Since;
She's seen a smile
Yeah, it's been quite a while

No one wants the seat right next to her
So she tries to hide
Holding all the pain in
Keeping the tears inside

Happy is nothing that she can be
No smiles, no laughs, nothing is all right
You'll never be standing next to her
She is nothing

No one tries to see the pain she hides
They fall for the fake smiles
No one tries to heal the pain inside
It's been quite a while

Since;
Someone showed how much they care
Anyone other than you was there
Everything felt all right
She slept through the whole night
Since;
She's seen a smile
Yeah, it's been quite a while

[I am nothing without you]

Author notes

I wrote this during the last week of school after my boyfriend who was a Senior was gone. It was really hard without him because he was pretty much the only one I had. I didn't have lunch with any of my friends or anything so I felt really alone. And I can't imagine high school without him, but I have to deal with it all over again for three full more years. But I couldn't find it until now, so I finally posted it. :]

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  • xToxicxCupcakesx
    September 8, 2007

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    Your poetry is AMAZING!!!
    I absolutely love it!
    Its just great the way you word everything the way you put your emotion into it! Its just wonderful!
    ~Natalie


  • see me fly 2
    August 18, 2007
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    well i hope everthing is ok. and thanks for entering.


  • otakuchick89
    August 10, 2007
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    AMAZING!!

    Wow that was ans AWSOME write!! N I kinda know how it is. went throught that once before. But ya gotta know he's ALWAYS gonna be there after skool and he LOVES YOU SO MUCH!! N try ta make the best of it!! Your friends will always be there!!
    and AGAIN AWSOME POEM!!
    I LUVED IT!!


  • Sidewalk-Rampage
    August 2, 2007

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    stop being so amazing
    with your poetry
    i ight just have to love it forever!
    gahh!
    i love this
    its wonderful
    your wonderful
    gahh


  • smntha.
    July 30, 2007

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    This is beautiful. The rhyme was awesome and it was just a very pretty piece It could easily be a song. Hope you and your bf stay in touch. Great poem and good luck in the contest.


  • ShadowsOfControl
    July 28, 2007

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    This is AMAZING Trish!!!! You're AMAZING!!! And I'm here for you!!! There's so many people who'd like the seat next to you!!!! You're a true poet! And I mean it!!!
    love ya,
    Ash


  • Secretly In Love
    July 28, 2007
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    That was awesome!!!!!!! It sounds like a song. But next year you'll have me and I'll be right beside you. And in that desk next to you...and sooooo not falling for all that fakeness. That's never been me and never will be. You know me, not one to fall for that from you! Love ya lots!!!!


  • GlowstickOfLove
    July 27, 2007
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    Beautyyyy
    :]

    ♥--T.R;;

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