Hello deceit,
how
are
you
today?
I dont want to take part,
so I'll go
the other way.
stalker.
n o t s o l o v e l y;
not to me,
not lately.
I could do without
the lies
and doubt
and having to figure
it all out
on my own.
Make me feel alone,
with every way I turn
it starts to
burn;
I guess we never learn
when you have a heart
thats
t o r n
ap art
to better please you.
whatever ammuses you;
since that's all you infest in,
you
lyin' lion.
but now
I'm starting to realize
that your lies
aren't so real,
and your eyes don't feel
much
and you don't sense a touch
because it's
too much
to ask of you
to do something
of me
for me
completely.
selfish.
shell fish.
hard hearted.
Hello deceit,
hello lies,
hello boy,
the cries
have gone to waste
and I don't have a taste
for your haste of
boom.
boom.
boom.
There's no room,
said that hare;
There's no room,
said that hatter;
Not at this table
because
you no longer
matter.
Tell me what you think
Comments
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haha that was such a cool poem in such a whacky way... i reckon you did exactly what you set out to do... awesome job
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That was very creative, I liked it a lot!! You expressed what you were feeling so clearly. Great job!
~Michaela~ -
thats was different. I loved it. Made me think of one of my ex boyfriends. probably because of the reference to Alice in Wonderland. Ah, well anyway, good job. Very nicely written.
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