Speculations fall to pieces
While saphire raindrops dance around you're corpse
Lite the path with glowing butterflies of blue light
Listen for the screaming echos of a forgotten past
Open you're eyes to the confidential lies
Squeez through to reality
Where in lays your bloodied remains
A mangled mess upon the floor
Paint the mirrors red
Smash down the walls of glass
Take a step back
Watch it all fade away into a sea of black
Come, come
Wash away your sin
Slice, slice
The flesh you once bore
Come, come
Walk across burning cinders
Your damnation was only the calling...
A contest entry
- Prewrites by February Moon.
1750 points, ended July 31, 2007, 20 entries
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I do not like the title, but other than that this piece is flawlessly beautiful. I had to hide the background to read it, which irks me a bit, but other than that, great job.
Chelsea
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Thank you very much. Sorry you had trouble reading it, should have just done plain or something. But again thank you. ^_^
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