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Stars of Heaven

Make me feel as
if the world will
cease to exist, that
heaven was created
as you looked into my
eyes. I am the only
love, you'll ever need

Wrap me in the
immeasurable feelings
lying deep,
living
inside
and staying in
my heart

Stay inside the
covered shelter,
holding me,
always near,
never far
under
the stars of
heaven.

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Michael William Schanuth

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  • Ale E
    October 15, 2007

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    Wow this was very good. Very good imagery and I dont' think i would change much..thanx a ton for the comment on my poem "Acid Tears Fall". Much appreciated.