My lover is quite feral
I remember well the day;
That he first made me his
He took my breath away.
My innocence astounds me
as I look back this night.
Oh God, I gloried in the lust
That brought me such delight.
Now I’m eternally captive;
to the thirst that he evoked.
Spending eternity ensnared
by the hungry fires he stoked.
Each time he comes to me to sate
his all consuming need;
for passion that cannot be quenched
the beast in me is freed.
It’s always like the first time
I dissolve in his embrace;
exotic lips, suckle skin
I melt into a state of grace.
He spreads my legs and lifts my hips.
Thrusts into my core.
I’m Angel, Demon, sinner, saint,
Goddess, lover, whore.
Greedy hands roughly tangle
To expose my barren neck,
locks of hair turn into chains
impelling hips, sweet havoc wreak.
I am lost, in my surrender.
Enchanted as my essence drains.
Sharpened teeth sink in - drink deeply -
but I never feel the pain.
A slender milky taloned finger,
strokes across my eager breast.
Blood oozes from the shocking wound
as his hand invades my weeping chest.
He stares, thru eyes, into my soul
and whispers “we will never part”
then he lovingly caresses…
my cold, dead, beat-less, heart.
Rapture washes over me,
to be so completely treasured.
He seals the slit with supple tongue,
as I shudder with the pleasure.
This is the way we worship
night after sleepless night.
“I” his vampire mistress,
“will never miss the light.”
Patricia Gibson-Little
Author notes
You did say twisted didn't you? That was the first thought I had after I finished this one.
Written September 2nd, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- Twisted Endings by Poes-Bro.
300 points, ended September 14, 2003, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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that was wonderful very inticing if i may say so myself i loved the vampireness and how she gave herself to him despite his vampiric heritgae -
ya thats twisted and it is badass. first i thought it would be something like your horny lover haveing aids but i think this was much better. thanks for entering.
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WOW!! That was incredible! Such vivid imagery and it flowed so well. Amazing write! I can't wait to read more. Write on, girl.
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Erotic little vampire "piece".
Very well written.
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Excellent!! The desire overcoming the pain. Great imagery. Would make a really cool scene in a vampire movie.
Good luck in the contest. This would win if I could vote. -
wow that was twisted...all cool till the heart touching...but very vamp...i loved it
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