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Noyer Ma Vie Dans le Chagrin♥

Ah.

There's that familiar pain in my chest. I'm being buried underneath all of the thoughts running in and out of my head, and I can't breath. I'm starting to sink; to crumble underneath everything.

Fearful and numb. I've fallen down into the depths of these black seas.
[I've now realized deceit and dependency have been my preeminent assests]
Defined as a Failure, a word etched in my skin. Oh how this sorrow loves to feast on this host that it lives within.


Oh how what I've wanted;;
Oh how what I've needed;;
is right there[beating in your chest]

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  • Exodus gold member
    July 31, 2007

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    You have some incredible imagery in here that works beautifully. I have to say the title has me curious, what language is that?
    Lovely work


  • AshliiAsphyxiation
    July 27, 2007
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    my god doll!!!!!

    i like love this!


    xoxo
    <33